D.Green - Man ebauches : Dojinshi the second, YATTA!

In fact, I'm really really not happy with how it's still so sketchy, I left out a few speech bubbles and my editting is kinda incoherent. So, I've put it down XD;.

Sorry for the inconvenience, and thank you Snicks_chan and tonks2006 for commenting!

To heck with that, I'm putting it back up XD;. So as to have it there.And be reminded to do it again! And fix all the bad stuff! (Dialogues/speech bubbles/editting/actually cleaning,inking and not having jsut sketches)


A note on D.Green-Man: D.Green-Man is a parody of D.Gray-Man, in which the 'good guys' of the stories take the place of the "bad guys",and vice versa~.






XD;;. EHEHE. "Brother, I'm pregnant♥" "OH NOOOO LINALIIII DON'T DO THAT TO MEEEEE >8D". ( >8D is the new official Earl-sama smilie!)


"FASTO"?! EEEH?! FASTO?!! I meant fatso T_T. The dialogues are ebauches too.They do'nt flow too well, it seems ;_;.


EDIT:FGLSFJLSDG. It looks like Linali is adressing Kanda when saying Tiki, but Tiki really is supposed to be Allen! So she's talking to Allen! But the dialogues dont flow right. I think I'll draw Allen's head in front of Linali and Kanda, going 'uuh.'. And yes, Linali really IS prodding Kanda with her talons XP.




Here's the cover! But why does it come last? To not spoil the characters choices XD?

And in fact, there are two new Yonkomas, and 3 pages not yet posted of my Allen x Kanda doujinshi XD;. So I'm two days late,ladila~.

Oh,and since it looked too light through the scanner, I forcefolly editted it a bit XD;.It looks kind of funny now XD;.